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Local Playwright Toni Press-Coffman Puts Some Heavenly Touches Into Her Latest Effort.
By Dave Irwin
SOMETIMES LOVE means you don't get the chance to say you're
sorry. Local playwright Toni Press-Coffman gives us one such cautionary
tale in her latest play, Touch. On one level, it's an exploration
of nerds reaching in and finding their emotions. On a deeper level,
it's a story about finding and losing the love of your life, and
how one man reconnects after that love is taken from him. And
into the bargain, the playwright effectively questions the philosophical
stance that the cosmos is cold and uncaring.
The play was developed by Press-Coffman with lead actor Jonathan
Ingbretson. Ingbretson is familiar to local audiences from his
work with Invisible Theatre, Live Theatre Workshop and the defunct
Upstairs Theatre Company. He's been busy lately, playing in Quintessential
Productions' Misalliance; Press-Coffman's recent work for
Borderlands Theatre, Two Days of Grace at Middleham; and
traveling to Minneapolis in April for a staged reading of Touch
at the Playwrights Center's Hothouse Festival. Although he had
a hand in creating the main character around whom this universe
revolves, the role of Kyle Kalke is too juicy to keep others away.
It will be interesting as this play becomes more widely produced,
as it deserves to be, to see how others handle its massive monologue
structure.
The play opens with a 20-minute solo by Kyle, a geeky astronomer
talking about how he met his wonderfully wacky wife, Zoe, when
she accidentally wandered into his high-school physics class.
It's a meeting he now believes was a miracle, since they were
so different. Ingbretson describes their courtship and six years
of marriage, laying the foundation for his introverted character
and her zany extroversion. But as we increasingly appreciate the
love he felt for Zoe, and her vital role in his self-discovery,
we also realize tragedy is going to rip apart this little love
fest.
Ingbretson's passionate description endears Zoe to us; and though
we're really looking forward to meeting her, we find she isn't
just dead, but murdered. Commendably, Press-Coffman isn't content
with letting Zoe merely die. The murder, its investigation and
Kyle's description of his eventual confrontation with her killers
gives a rich dramatic texture to what might otherwise have been
merely maudlin.
Patrick Burke plays Kyle's childhood best friend, Benny LaCosta.
Although we meet him in adulthood, trying to assuage Kyle's grief,
we get revealing glimpses of the two of them growing up, as they
reenact key moments of their awkward adolescence. The tricky technique
of using flashbacks within a flashback is handled adroitly. We
are never confused as to where we are in the overall chronology,
and each flashback expands our understanding of the relationships
between the characters.
We also meet Zoe's older sister Serena (played by Christina Walker),
an early childhood education teacher who's anything but schoolmarmish.
She screams obscenities in the police station and teaches kids
how to act like lunatics (note the astronomical tie-in). As Kyle
withdraws to rediscover his own emotions through rutting sessions
with a prostitute named Kathleen (Erika L. Cossitt), Benny and
Serena, after years of casual association, finally discover each
other for the first time. It adds a nice spin to the tale, and
eases what had been a relentless onstage focus on Ingbretson's
character. In the end, nature reveals itself in a way that underlines
the theme of synchronicity and demonstrates that perhaps the universe
is not as unfeeling as it may sometimes appear.
Touch is not without its flaws, however. The role of the
heart-of-gold hooker is little more than a device, for example.
Of course, hookers make a stunning, but ultimately bad, impression
at astronomical society gatherings, so the reinvigorated Kyle
dumps her and heads for Hawaii with his remaining fortune. Cossitt
is somewhat wooden in the contrived role, gesturing choreographically
where the rest of the cast seems to flow naturally. Her believability
is further undermined by the fact that her supposedly street-smart
character engages in language and dialogue almost indistinguishable
from that of the doctor, astronomer and school teacher.
Indeed, Press-Coffman's language is at times too formal and flowery,
making us self-conscious of the play at the expense of its characters.
Unless a writer forces them to, people don't really say things
like "our hope dwindled," or "the weather was tranquil";
and they use contractions like "I wasn't" instead of
saying without fail "I was not." Press-Coffman does
follow a very well-thought-out narrative though, leading us carefully
on our route of discovery.
Touch is nicely assembled by Damesrocket cohort and director,
Caroline Reed. In particular, Susan Rojas' sparse set deserves
mention. The action mostly takes place on twin circular raised
platforms that resemble binary stars orbiting each other, with
tiny lights like constellations underneath.
Touch is well worth seeing. The writing by Press-Coffman,
quibbles aside, represents maturity and consistency. The technical
support all works well. The acting is very good, with Ingbretson
turning in an inspired performance. In the end, you will believe
a nerd can love.
Touch continues through May 15 at Damesrocket
Theatre, 125 E. Congress St. Show times are 8 p.m. Thursday
through Saturday. Tickets are $10, with discounts for seniors
and students. For information and reservations, call 623-7852.
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